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my first try with PP
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03-10-2012, 01:21 PM
hi !! this is my first try with my daughter, what do you think ?? sorry for my english !!

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03-10-2012, 03:16 PM
It is hard to tell with the color and B&W.

I think the eye (on the left) is shaarper. And maybe you should see if you can get rid of the stray hairs on the left side by the cheek and mask.

And don't worry about your English...Smile Welcome to the forum.
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03-11-2012, 11:21 AM
prefer the color version.in the b n w one,seem to have lost clarity in her left eye as well as the mask. Just got too dark thereby losing details. JMO
 
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03-11-2012, 11:50 AM
Thanks to you two for your message, effectively in black and white it is not best, but at the moment I make a lot of try to master well the software good Sunday. I hope that you understand my poor Englishman of school
 
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06-12-2012, 12:26 AM
(03-11-2012, 11:50 AM)bubu91 Wrote: Thanks to you two for your message, effectively in black and white it is not best, but at the moment I make a lot of try to master well the software good Sunday. I hope that you understand my poor Englishman of school

That's the style I seem to be working with.


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