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my first try with PP - bubu91 - 03-10-2012
hi !! this is my first try with my daughter, what do you think ?? sorry for my english !!
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RE: my first try with PP - Slynky - 03-10-2012
It is hard to tell with the color and B&W.
I think the eye (on the left) is shaarper. And maybe you should see if you can get rid of the stray hairs on the left side by the cheek and mask.
And don't worry about your English...
Welcome to the forum.
RE: my first try with PP - yklee - 03-11-2012
prefer the color version.in the b n w one,seem to have lost clarity in her left eye as well as the mask. Just got too dark thereby losing details. JMO
RE: my first try with PP - bubu91 - 03-11-2012
Thanks to you two for your message, effectively in black and white it is not best, but at the moment I make a lot of try to master well the software good Sunday. I hope that you understand my poor Englishman of school
RE: my first try with PP - david5512 - 06-12-2012
(03-11-2012, 11:50 AM)bubu91 Wrote: Thanks to you two for your message, effectively in black and white it is not best, but at the moment I make a lot of try to master well the software good Sunday. I hope that you understand my poor Englishman of school
That's the style I seem to be working with.