05-27-2011, 10:41 PM
I like it...doesn't look over done to me....just a few suggestions....if you want to take it a bit further...before you go in PP with your image...you can use your photo edit software...I use PSP the most...has most of the features of PS and can use 99 % of the same filter.....anyway...I would fix the slight cast of the eyes....I would select and copy one of the iris and pupils of one eye...and save that image...then clone in some extra white space on a copy of the original image ...of that same eye....then copy and paste the iris with pupil image in a little better alignment with the other eye....then take that corrected image into PP...I often have to borrow eye parts from other photos taken in other snaps taken during the same sessions. Next, the eyebrows look a little too much sharpened....then you might want to reduce the shine on the face....and last...there are some grey looking areas on face, neck and chest where shadows were brightened....after PP you can use your edit program to use a tool that will allow to select a nearby skin color and then change the grey area"" to "target". This will take it back to a more natural skin color withou changing the darkness or lightness of the area. Again....really good job!