[Animatexyz]

A few things I would work on here. Since she parts her hair on the right you should turn her to the other side. Always shoot the part side. Drop the chin down. When the chin is lifted like that your subject will appear like they are apprehensive about the camera being in their face. You lose the connection with the audience. You also need to watch out for the sternocleidomastoid. The neck muscle. You have her neck cranked so hard that it's flexing that muscle which makes her neck look bigger than it is. It takes away from her femininity. you can fix that by turning her shoulders into the camera slightly. Hope that helps