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10-04-2011, 09:15 PM
Thought I'd post up my first effort. It's subtle, but I didn't want to go too far (as it's VERY easy to get carried away!) as I didn't want to offend the wife too much Tongue

C&C's most welcome!

Thanks
Paul

   
 
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10-05-2011, 06:05 AM
That looks really good Paul. As you say, not too OTT and it IS easy to get carried away !
Nice looking lady you have there.

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10-05-2011, 05:57 PM
Looks great to me....also good job on whomever took the photo....no reflection in the glasses...that is hard to do.
 
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10-05-2011, 06:40 PM
Thanks Garratt & Kat. I took the photo with a Lastolite EzyBox mounted on a Canon 430EX flash attached to a camera bracket so I'm guessing I had it angled up and far enough above her head for it not to reflect in the old specs.
 
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10-06-2011, 03:17 AM
To avoid a flash reflection in specs I usually shoot two pix, one with and one without specs then merge the two. It works pretty well.
 
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10-06-2011, 01:09 PM
(10-04-2011, 09:15 PM)DevilYellowCV8 Wrote: Thought I'd post up my first effort. It's subtle, but I didn't want to go too far (as it's VERY easy to get carried away!) as I didn't want to offend the wife too much Tongue

C&C's most welcome!

Thanks
Paul

Nice first go at it. Cool

For the perfection-minded anal among us (hides), you might consider removing that little sweep of hair on the forehead--I think you can do that with PPRo.

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10-13-2011, 06:01 AM
(10-04-2011, 09:15 PM)DevilYellowCV8 Wrote: Thought I'd post up my first effort. It's subtle, but I didn't want to go too far (as it's VERY easy to get carried away!) as I didn't want to offend the wife too much Tongue

C&C's most welcome!

Thanks
Paul
Good job!! Keep going. What i would work on is some shadow and sculp. I spent a lot of hours in front of pc with PP running :-)
http://vims.zenfolio.com/p915710469

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10-24-2011, 04:59 PM
I think you did a great job and you really brought out her eyes......
 
  


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