[Philos]

Here is an example of how I use PP for portraits.
Skin toning and eye/teeth whitening and face sculpting in PP
Sharpening, colorcorrections done in Photoshop.
The first pic is the straight from camera JPG, the 2nd one is the "after"

[calisnoop]

All in all not bad,
the eyes are a little too white now......reduce that some, and you should be in business!

[ketchup]

Inside her eyes is a picture of the photographer, a distraction that causes to look away from the picture and try and want to figure out what the photographer was doing to cause that.

[Grommit]

Agree with calisnoop, those eyes way too white!

[wingnut1]

Yes it's just the eyes too white that distracts from a good picture. I would have reduced the pores a tiny bit more as well, but then I'm no portrait expert.