02-11-2012, 06:45 PM
My first real photo edit.
![[Image: jumper-024-web.jpg]](http://primaveraphoto.com/forum-photos/jumper-024-web.jpg)
02-11-2012, 09:06 PM
Well, Mark, when you start with a great looking model, there's not much left to do. 
The images are a bit small so it's hard to tell the improvements because they are so subtle. I see you "blended" the redness on her cheeks a bit, couple of tiny wrinkles gone near the shoulder blade, eyes sparkle a bit more, hair a bit more dark/saturated.
It's a good job. If I had anything to add, I might go a little bit more on the forehead where the specular highlights are...there seem to still be some tiny bumps there that the light picks up too much. All-in-all, though, good job!
The images are a bit small so it's hard to tell the improvements because they are so subtle. I see you "blended" the redness on her cheeks a bit, couple of tiny wrinkles gone near the shoulder blade, eyes sparkle a bit more, hair a bit more dark/saturated.
It's a good job. If I had anything to add, I might go a little bit more on the forehead where the specular highlights are...there seem to still be some tiny bumps there that the light picks up too much. All-in-all, though, good job!